Chitika2

Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Weather


The softness of a gentle breeze during sharp dawn
Transports tranquility through the electric air;
Wispy clouds lazily streak across the heavens
As scintillating colors radiate across all spectra;
Such a marvelous sight prophesies certain terror
Of violent vortices and rushing waters;
Mother Nature's beauty and brawn
Bends to the will of no human;

34 comments:

  1. Very good, you have a great way with words.

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  2. Nice poem. Although it took me a while to read the big words :P

    hazdbot.blogspot.com

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  3. nice especially the last line

    Bends to the will of no human;

    so true

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  4. i have to agree, the end of this poem is sweet!

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  5. i love your poems. great picture too!

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  6. That's a beautiful poem, keep it up!

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  7. u mind if i copy this? just playing. good post.

    following and supporting.

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  8. Amazing imagery! :) Following and Supporting! Keep up the great work.

    http://blazaimagenes.blogspot.com/

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  9. hey thanks for stopping by my blog, I do in fact love poetry and this poem is fantastic :D You have quite the talent, I will be following!

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  10. Fucking beautiful! Following you.

    wellthisdoesntsuck.blogspot.com

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  11. Last line of the poem FTW. No matter we accomplish, mother nature will always come back to put us in our place.

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  12. awesome stuff! i chase tornados in the spring and early summer, this fits it well!

    followed

    blundersfrom6foot2.blogspot.com

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  13. that paints a really intricate and tranquil picture in my head.

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  15. awsm pic! awsm poem!

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  16. evry serene. I enojoyed that a lot. thanks :)

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  17. you painted a wonderful picture with your writing.

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  18. Sweet random poems, keep it up! Check out my blogg too~!

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  19. Very good.
    Great imagery.
    Quite talented.

    ~Showing support to my fellow bloggers.

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  20. Very eloquent poem!

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  21. You're a poet and you know it!

    I also like the photo. Nice contrasting the grey and brown.

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  22. that was a very lovely piece, hope to read more. following

    http://underratedfilms.blogspot.com/

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  23. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOW!!!! SOOO GOOOOD T_T argh, check my blog >.< the literature sucks, tell me what to improve please! I'd be so grateful :DD

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  24. nice one. i admire your writing style, so may i adopt it?

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