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Friday, January 21, 2011

Dragonfly


Glassy wings slice the air,
As emerald missiles hover above the shimmering beyond;
Soulless, mechanical hunger
Beckons the creatures through endless tiny pinpricks;
Dance your drunken duet,
Ensure the future generation's survival.
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21 comments:

  1. hwidmanJanuary 21, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    Soothing

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  2. MetatronJanuary 21, 2011 at 12:52 PM

    Kinda reminds me of people.

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  3. Jimmy FungusJanuary 21, 2011 at 1:23 PM

    I thought you were talking about a jet fighter flying through the air in this one...

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  4. ZakkJanuary 21, 2011 at 2:38 PM

    I like it, good job.

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  5. UltimaniacJanuary 21, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    You write pretty girl- GOOD! PRETTY GOOD! XD

    Still following!

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  6. DooJanuary 21, 2011 at 4:50 PM

    Very nice :)

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  7. poelanotexJanuary 21, 2011 at 5:33 PM

    Sounds professional :O

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  8. IsaacJanuary 21, 2011 at 7:42 PM

    Nice good job

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 22, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    Nicely written! I like your style :)

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  10. SnuggsJanuary 22, 2011 at 3:15 PM

    Another great poem. Keep it up!

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  11. KGJanuary 22, 2011 at 10:54 PM

    awesome poems and a great blog. im following!

    follow back

    http://kgeez.blogspot.com/

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  12. TotoJanuary 23, 2011 at 5:54 AM

    i love dragonflys! nice poem!

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    and I will return the favor ;)

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  13. AnonfourtwentyJanuary 23, 2011 at 12:38 PM

    Besides being beautiful, you got great poetry!

    followin'

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  14. Solsby KidJanuary 23, 2011 at 12:46 PM

    Lovely :)

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  15. LeoJanuary 23, 2011 at 1:04 PM

    Good job indeed.
    Follow me :)
    http://simplykidleo.blogspot.com/

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  16. AnonymousJanuary 23, 2011 at 3:46 PM

    Always good with the updates and the poems. Really like your work!

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  17. Mister KingJanuary 23, 2011 at 11:25 PM

    will you marry me? you're poems are amazing.

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    enjoy a good laugh here.

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  18. DwrekJanuary 24, 2011 at 3:45 PM

    Ohhh Dragon Fly bring us away!


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  19. More DucksJanuary 25, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    Hey, it's me Marduk. I have a new blog now. Check it out.

    http://moreduckslastchance.blogspot.com/

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  20. AnonymousFebruary 1, 2011 at 8:37 PM

    That picture's awesome!

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  21. Shaker CupFebruary 2, 2011 at 6:28 AM

    im usually kind of afraid from insects...

    anyway, i enjoy reading some good poetry now and then :p

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